November feedback

Your web-log evidences great progress and a clear understanding of the task.  The edits show a desire to improve and your creative journey is demonstrated in a series of posts.

The current edit shows sensitivity to the edt and intuitive editing technique.  The narrative is clear to me and there are a range of shots including point of view shots and some nice technical effects such as a lens flare.

Targets

• Show the video to a target audience and gain feedback.  Prepare questions to gain some qualitative research
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• Bookend the video with something to clarify the story such as the ordr of service
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• Can you make the order of service clearer. Maybe include a close up and drop it in avoiding any continuity issues.
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• Have you any more footage from the studio that you can include? For example some close ups of the artist and use of lighting may improve the range of shots.
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• Ad a logo for the channel and a title for the song.
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• Tighten the edit by shortening some clips.
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• Ensure lip-synching is accurate.

The video is reaching level 4 and shows great promise.